An article titled “If I
were a poor black kid” was written after President Obama gave a speech about
how this is the time where people in the middle and lower classes to be able to
make a living for themselves. The article addresses the problems that inner
city black kids face and how there are other kids that have a greater advantage
just because of where they were born and to who. He talks about what he would
do if he were in that situation and how he would work hard to achieve his goals
and succeed. After he talks about how hard achieving these goals are and states
“Is this easy? No it’s not. It’s
hard. It takes a special kind of kid to succeed. And to succeed even with these
tools is much harder for a black kid from West Philadelphia than a white kid
from the suburbs. But it’s not impossible. The tools are there. The technology
is there. And the opportunities there”. He is showing that if you are determined
and willing to work hard for what you want then you will still be able succeed.
However, there are many things that he is not thinking about. For starters the
author is a man named Gene Marks and is a white male who doesn’t live in the
inner city. A question that kept going through my mind while reading this was,
how do you know what you would do or how hard it is if you never went through
it yourself? I agree with what he says about someone who works hard will
achieve more than one who doesn’t, however there are many X factors that he is
not thinking about that could stop someone who is determined enough to work
hard for what they want. For example, someone who wants to learn more in school
but the school doesn’t have good teachers who are willing to teach will affect
the kid. Or if the kid is being bullied in school, that will have an impact on
his grades. Someone who is black and gets the worst of everything just because
of the color of his skin will affect how he looks at work. People in the suburbs
or nice neighborhoods often overlook how lucky they are that they don’t have to
go through many of the problems that others do and see it as something that doesn’t
happen. Things like this do happen, but why should someone have a worse chance
than another just because they were born 10 miles apart?
A response to this article was written by Jenée
Desmond-Harris, a middle aged black man. He talks about how Marks only talks
about what things he would do if he were poor with things that others that have
no access to. In a response to what Marks would do if he were a poor black kid,
Harris states “But also, there's no word in the piece on how Marks imagines
that he would, as a poor child, suddenly be infused with the perspective and
sophistication of a middle-class adult. In addition, he, perhaps
unintentionally, admits that his advice is useless to all but a select few
gifted, mature and lucky children.” He is showing that if you are not that
special kind of kid then you will not be able to succeed. Also Marks only talks
about things he would do if he were poor in the city and never states what he
would do if he were black also or any of the things that make it harder. I
agree with Harris that people who never went through being a poor black kid in
the city won’t be able to understand why it was hard.